Monday, 26 April 2010

Kaylee's first story at school

Kaylee has only been at school a week now. Here is the story she wrote on her very first day at Springston School. Isn't it a great story!

Keep up the great work, Kaylee!

7 comments:

  1. What a fantastic story Kaylee. I remember hearing you talk about your dog on your very first day in Room 1, and now look at all the words you can write! Liz.

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  2. this is the firts time i'v seen your blog I really like your story Kaylee.
    I have a cool dog to that cuddles me as well.

    From Harry team endeavour

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  3. Great story Kaylee sounds like a very nice dog. It's a great start to your blog.

    From Izaac Room 6

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  4. Kaylee's story was good on her first day. I think your writing is very good.

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  5. Hi Kaylee

    This is an excellent story about your dog. I remember when I wrote my first story when I started school, it was about my family.
    This is a great start to your classes new blog. Keep up the good work!

    Hannah D, Team Venture

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  6. Good story. keep up the good work. From Lucy B.

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  7. ''Great story''. ''I bet your dog is cuddly''.


    From Chrissy E-Team year 6

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