Our goals have been to write longer stories by using interesting words, and adding details to keep the listener interested. We try new words by writing the sounds we can hear, and underlining our tries. We have to start with a capital letter and put full stops at the end of our sentences. We need to write all our letters the right way too. Lots to think about! Whew!
Check out our photopeach stories in the Older Post section below to see how much we have learned.
Room 3. Great writing. We enjoyed hearing your stories. From Daniel
ReplyDeleteGreat work Room 3. I liked the detail you put in your stories. Cameron
That was awesome Room 3. I really liked your stories. tessa what happens next in your story? Jed
Room 3 great work. I loved your stories. I want to hear some more. Kelsey
Thank you for your comments Jed, Cameron, Daniel and Kelsey. Tessa said that her story had a happy ending and when they went up they were safe from the shark. We are glad you noticed the detail we are trying to put in our stories. It makes them more interesting. Mrs Rose
DeleteI think your stories are great because you put lots of expression into them. from Adele.
ReplyDeleteI like the spaces between your words. from Addison.
Thank you for writing fabulous stories. from Sam.
I like the way your stories were written. frm Katie.
Hi Springston Pathfinders, thank you for leaving a comment on our blog. Your blog is great. We really enjoyed listening to your stories. Do you go to the same school as the Springston Explorers?
ReplyDeleteI like your stories.
ReplyDeleteShane - B6
You used some interesting words.
ReplyDeleteZech B6
Yes we do. The Explorers were in our class last year or the year before that.
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